I am unique and strong
I wonder what I look like when I’m an adult
I hear babies crying
I see a movie star in my dreams
I want a MILLION DOLLARS
I am unique and strong
I pretend I am famous
I feel powerful
I touch a hairy monster
I worry about my future
I cry about my feelings most of the time
I am unique an strong
I understand my friendship with you
I say babies are the best
I dream to meet my favorite movie star
I hope I have a wonderful future
I am unique and strong
It was a pleasure to read your poem. You are off to a good start with your blogging. I hope you have a wonderful future too. I am curious as to who your favorite movie star is and why you chose that particular movie star. Do you mind sharing?
Posted by: Mrs. C | October 10, 2006 at 06:26 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem! I liked the wide variety of emotions and different aspects of your personality that you reference. Your strength, your desires, even your worries, are all portrayed in this poem. I am impressed! Your reader can definitely develop an understanding of who you are.
Like Mrs. C, I am also interested to know more. What are your dreams for your wonderful future?
Posted by: Ms. McGrew | October 10, 2006 at 09:03 PM
I love babies too! It was also very interesting to see your desire for riches and the effect that the media has on all of us beginning at a very young age (ex.I see a movie star in my dreams I want a MILLION DOLLARS
I am famous). I really can get a feel for your individual personality through your "I am" poem. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work Lindsay!
Posted by: Ms. Best | October 11, 2006 at 09:37 AM
Good work on your "I Am" poem Lindsey. I know that it can be difficult to know how to give your readers a sense of yourself in a matter of a few lines, but I think that you did a great job. I can see you looking ahead to the women that you will become, wondering what your life will look like. I encourage you to stick with your dreams and you will do great! In your poem, you say that you pretend that you are famous sometimes and you talk some about movie stars too. I wonder, do you like acting? Have you considered taking drama classes? It seems like you might enjoy them. Good luck on your new blog, it was fun to read.
Posted by: Colleen | October 11, 2006 at 10:13 AM
Hi,
Ms. Best
t am glad that you and I have som,e things in common. I love to hang around babies. They are very adoreable. I would like to be famous be cause it seems very fun.I would like to have am MILLION DOLLARS, so I could go shopping for alot of things.
Ps I will keep up the good work and thank you for posting a comment to me.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 10:35 AM
Hi,
Ms.Coleen
I do love acting but I can not do drama class yet I am only in 5th grade. When i get in 6th grade I will probaly be in drama club but I do not know yet.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 10:42 AM
Hi,
Mrs.C
I do not mind sharing anything with you.I like kids that are movie stars. I am not quite sure who my favorite movie star is yet. One day I will tell you soon.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 10:49 AM
Hi,
Mrs.McGrew
I want a wonderful future. I want a kid and a husband.Hopefully I will get a great future.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 10:59 AM
Hey Lil Bit, You did a great job on this I am very proud of you that you being so young can voice your hopes and dreams... It gives me alot of hope that I too can dream and become the person I want to be at 22... I love you so much and I want you to know that I am always here for you if you need anything... I love you baby girl.. love KK
Posted by: KK | October 17, 2006 at 05:29 PM
hey baby girl i knew you had it in you !!! i am blown away that you can write so well, knew you could do it !!!! well i love you and never give up !!!!! ~~mom~~
Posted by: marsha brown | October 17, 2006 at 05:45 PM
I know that we will get our dreams that we want to have.I have confidence that we will get our dreams.Thank you kk love you to.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 06:14 PM
Hey mom we all know that the route I am going that I will not give up.At least I will not give up.
I hope I do not. I want to go to collage.
Posted by: lindsey | October 17, 2006 at 06:21 PM
Hey "lindsey",
Your poem has so many messages in it, and says so much about you. I am so proud of you and impressed by your ability to write so much in so little words. Keep up the great work, and YES you will achieve your dreams one day baby girl.
Hugs
Jodi
Posted by: Jodi | October 18, 2006 at 02:44 AM
Hey Jodi I know I will achieve my dreams and future.If you have any questions on my blog you just write back to me and I will answer. I am alays here to type to you and any body that writes me.
Posted by: lindsey | October 18, 2006 at 03:02 PM
Hey Jodi I know I will achieve my dreams and future.If you have any questions on my blog you just write back to me and I will answer. I am alays here to type to you and any body that writes me.
Posted by: lindsey | October 18, 2006 at 03:02 PM
Lindsey, I Love the poem thats very sweet of you to think of your self like that.. You just keep on the right track and life will take you were ever you wanna go !! :) i love you and so does jamie and JT we all do ...whitney
Posted by: whitney | October 23, 2006 at 05:34 PM
I like your poem. I hope all of the things you want from life happen for you.
Posted by: Alecia | November 14, 2006 at 06:06 PM
Alecia,
I know that I will atleast I hope I wiil. If I do it will the best thing ever to happen to me.
There is this boy I like and if I get him it will be great to. He is just to cute to not like him, or just to push him away.
Posted by: lindsey | November 14, 2006 at 06:24 PM