Lindsey's Wonderful Thoughts

Twelve Holly Days.

A Wacky Web Tale

Sing to the tune of “The Twelve Days of Christmas.”

On the first day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me a pickle in a pear tree.

On the second day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the third day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the fourth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the fifth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the sixth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the seventh day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the eighth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
eight cats jumping, seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the ninth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
nine tvs dancing, eight cats jumping, seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the tenth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
ten kangaroos leaping, nine TVs dancing, eight cats jumping, seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the eleventh day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
eleven tomatoes thanking, ten kangaroos leaping, nine TVs dancing, eight cats jumping, seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

On the twelfth day of Christmas, Mrs. A gave to me
twelve mouses shouting, eleven tomatoes thanking, ten kangaroos leaping, nine TVs dancing, eight cats jumping, seven dogs swimming, six computers playing, five awesome books, four nice golden ring, three cute parents, two pretty puppies, and a(n) pickle in a pear tree.

Thank You!

Alot of thank you's to all of you that have helped me with my writting. I am glad that all of you are here to help us bloggers.  I am  checking over my work much better now that ou all have came along. I am glad that I am a much better writer, because it would be very emberresed if  every body saw your mistake that is emberessing. 

Chris you are very helpful to me and everybody that is a blogger. You always point out my mistakes to me and I am very thankful of that. Chris you are a wonderful person to me and my blog you always help me very well. Thank you for your help. You are a great person.

                                                              THANKS TO ALL!

Thank You All for the Comments!

Thank you all for your helping me with my mistakes

To be continued, i have more to say..............

The Best Picnic Ever!!!!!!

I went back over my work and I made some changes to my word choice in my story to make it better.  I made sure that none of the words were misspelled so it does not look odd.  I had some one check over my work.

Deanna, Ansley, and I gathered at my house and we talked about what we should do for the day. They gave me some ideas. Deanna suggested that we go to the park. I do not really think that we should. I told everybody that it is a very gorgeous day. I say we go on a picnic on a nice day like this one. They said that is awesome idea. So what should we take on the picnic?

 

        I advised them that we should make some sandwiches. I have some mayo, turkey, cheese, ham, and bread. If you want I have some chips that we can take. Ansley said what kind do you have? I replied I do not know, let’s go look. So we went to look in my cabinets. I saw some lays, barbecue, and I also had a thing of Pringles. Deanna said that we take lays, and Ansley said we take Pringles. So I suggested we take both. They replied that will do. I told Deanna to get out the sandwiches, to make them. She washed her hands. Then she asked us what we wanted on our sandwiches. I told her that I wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. Then Ansley said ham and mayo. Deanna wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. After she was done making them she put plastic rap on them and put everything away. Then she put the sandwiches in the cooler and into the car. We packed up so we could leave. We got in the car. I drove to this place, it had a lot of leafs everywhere with berries on it. Ansley recommended we have them for like a little desert. I  vague that was a great scheme.

 

             We got the cooler out of the car and sat down on my blanket. Deanna took out the sandwiches and handed them to us. Took the plastic rap of the sandwiches and then we ate them. We all said thank you to each other for coming and Deanna making the sandwiches. We also told her that they were totally delicious. Then we ate some berries they were also very good to. I said that it was the best thing I have ever done with my best friends.