The Best Picnic Ever!!!!!!

I went back over my work and I made some changes to my word choice in my story to make it better.  I made sure that none of the words were misspelled so it does not look odd.  I had some one check over my work.

Deanna, Ansley, and I gathered at my house and we talked about what we should do for the day. They gave me some ideas. Deanna suggested that we go to the park. I do not really think that we should. I told everybody that it is a very gorgeous day. I say we go on a picnic on a nice day like this one. They said that is awesome idea. So what should we take on the picnic?

 

        I advised them that we should make some sandwiches. I have some mayo, turkey, cheese, ham, and bread. If you want I have some chips that we can take. Ansley said what kind do you have? I replied I do not know, let’s go look. So we went to look in my cabinets. I saw some lays, barbecue, and I also had a thing of Pringles. Deanna said that we take lays, and Ansley said we take Pringles. So I suggested we take both. They replied that will do. I told Deanna to get out the sandwiches, to make them. She washed her hands. Then she asked us what we wanted on our sandwiches. I told her that I wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. Then Ansley said ham and mayo. Deanna wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. After she was done making them she put plastic rap on them and put everything away. Then she put the sandwiches in the cooler and into the car. We packed up so we could leave. We got in the car. I drove to this place, it had a lot of leafs everywhere with berries on it. Ansley recommended we have them for like a little desert. I  vague that was a great scheme.

 

             We got the cooler out of the car and sat down on my blanket. Deanna took out the sandwiches and handed them to us. Took the plastic rap of the sandwiches and then we ate them. We all said thank you to each other for coming and Deanna making the sandwiches. We also told her that they were totally delicious. Then we ate some berries they were also very good to. I said that it was the best thing I have ever done with my best friends.