Lindsey's Wonderful Thoughts

Thank You!

Alot of thank you's to all of you that have helped me with my writting. I am glad that all of you are here to help us bloggers.  I am  checking over my work much better now that ou all have came along. I am glad that I am a much better writer, because it would be very emberresed if  every body saw your mistake that is emberessing. 

Chris you are very helpful to me and everybody that is a blogger. You always point out my mistakes to me and I am very thankful of that. Chris you are a wonderful person to me and my blog you always help me very well. Thank you for your help. You are a great person.

                                                              THANKS TO ALL!

Thank You All for the Comments!

Thank you all for your helping me with my mistakes

To be continued, i have more to say..............

The Best Picnic Ever!!!!!!

I went back over my work and I made some changes to my word choice in my story to make it better.  I made sure that none of the words were misspelled so it does not look odd.  I had some one check over my work.

Deanna, Ansley, and I gathered at my house and we talked about what we should do for the day. They gave me some ideas. Deanna suggested that we go to the park. I do not really think that we should. I told everybody that it is a very gorgeous day. I say we go on a picnic on a nice day like this one. They said that is awesome idea. So what should we take on the picnic?

 

        I advised them that we should make some sandwiches. I have some mayo, turkey, cheese, ham, and bread. If you want I have some chips that we can take. Ansley said what kind do you have? I replied I do not know, let’s go look. So we went to look in my cabinets. I saw some lays, barbecue, and I also had a thing of Pringles. Deanna said that we take lays, and Ansley said we take Pringles. So I suggested we take both. They replied that will do. I told Deanna to get out the sandwiches, to make them. She washed her hands. Then she asked us what we wanted on our sandwiches. I told her that I wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. Then Ansley said ham and mayo. Deanna wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. After she was done making them she put plastic rap on them and put everything away. Then she put the sandwiches in the cooler and into the car. We packed up so we could leave. We got in the car. I drove to this place, it had a lot of leafs everywhere with berries on it. Ansley recommended we have them for like a little desert. I  vague that was a great scheme.

 

             We got the cooler out of the car and sat down on my blanket. Deanna took out the sandwiches and handed them to us. Took the plastic rap of the sandwiches and then we ate them. We all said thank you to each other for coming and Deanna making the sandwiches. We also told her that they were totally delicious. Then we ate some berries they were also very good to. I said that it was the best thing I have ever done with my best friends.

Ways That I Know I Make Careless Mistakes.

I think that listening to the podcast was great.  It really helped me learn something about my writting.  In the beginning most of the time I was being very careless about my writing I was not checking over my work that I typed.  If  I  do not check over your work  I would make  honest  mistakes, and when you read the post you would not be able to understand it.  So next time I will always check over my work. Another why I know if  I make mistakes is on my blog when people type to me.  Some of the people that type to me ask me questions on the mistake, and others tell me the mistake I have.  That is really friendly I think.  I am glad that they do that.

                                                                       What would you do if  you made careless mistakes on your post that you wrote?

The best picnic ever!

                    Deanna, Ansley, and I met at my house and we talked about what we should do for the day. They gave me some ideas. Deanna suggested that we go to the park. I do not really think that we should. I told everybody that it is a very beautiful day. I say we go on a picnic on a nice day like this one. They said that is a wonderful idea. So what should we take on the picnic?

 

         I told them that we should make some sandwiches. I have some mayo, turkey, cheese, ham, and bread. If you want I have some chips that we can take. Ansley said what kind do you have? I replied I do not know, let’s go look. So we went to look in my cabinets. I saw some lays, barbeque, and I also had a thing of Pringles. Deanna said that we take lays, and Ansley said we take Pringles. So I suggested we take both. They replied that will do. I told Deanna to get out the sandwiches, to make them. She washed her hands. Then she asked us what we wanted on our sandwiches. I told her that I wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. Then Ansley said ham and mayo. Deanna wanted turkey, cheese, and mayo. After she was done making them she put plastic rap on them and put everything away. Then she put the sandwiches in the cooler and into the car. We packed up so we could leave. We got in the car. I drove to this place it had a lot of leafs everywhere with berries on it. Ansley suggested we have them for like a little desert. I said that was a great idea.

 

             We got the cooler out of the car and sat down on my blanket. Deanna took out the sandwiches and handed them to us. Took the plastic rap of the sandwiches and then we ate them. We all said thank you to each other for coming and Deanna making the sandwiches. We also told her that they were totally delicious. Then we ate some berries they were also very good to. I said that it was the best thing I have ever done with my best friends.

 

 

 

Photo Courtesy of Chris

 

Technology's Daring and Back

Have you ever used technology? Well I have but I was very confused. When I was  little I used alot of sources to help me learn how to use a computer. One of them was my mom. She showed me how to type. At school I learned how to use the Internet.

This resource has helped me in many different ways. Like when I type I can type very fast, and know what I am writing and the keys I am typing on. I know what kind of pages to go to in order to find the information I need.

Who is Hannah Montana?

   by  Visions By Vicky 

 

Miley Cyrus  has a huge secret. She is Hannah Montana.  Only her family knows. Also Emily Osment and Mitchell Musso do to. She was interviewed in Disney Media in New York City. Thats how I figured it out about her and her huge secret.   

Hannah has a show out on Disney channel. The name of the show is called Hannah Montana. I love to watch it in my free time. It is a very COOL show! Hannah Montana is very BEAUTIFUL. She seems very SWEET.

My Favorite Thing To Learn!!!!

I love to learn about writing.It is a very helpful subject. The way writing will help you is with your spelling,capitalization,catchy sentences,and a great beginning,middle,and ending.It will also help you with your word choice. What I mean is you will use words like great, wonderful,and awesome not words like good.People will not want to read it if you do not have great word choice.

When my teacher gives me a writing assignment I love to write a story on my own and not use that much stories with a prompt. I like to think more without a prompt. It might help me with my writing.

What kind of stories do you love to read? Explain

"I Am" Poem

I am unique and strong

I wonder what I look like when I’m an adult

I hear babies crying

I see a movie star in my dreams

I want a MILLION DOLLARS 

I am unique and strong

 

I pretend I am famous

I feel powerful

I touch a hairy monster

I worry about my future

I cry about my feelings most of the time

I am unique an strong

I understand my friendship with you

I say babies are the best

I dream to meet my favorite movie star

I hope I have a wonderful future

I am unique and strong

Meeting Lindsey

 This is my very first blog. I am very fun to be around. I love to talk to friends and family. My favorite thing to do is play video games. My other favorite thing is to eat food. Food is very tasty!