Tina's Blog

I have learned knew things

       When I listened to my recording it will help me to understand more of my writing. Others also will think my writing is more mysterious and it will help me to be more skillful in my writing. I also want people to be more curio[u]s about my writing. It would make me happy if I wouldn't make mistakes on my paper at all. My paper would sound even better if I added more action and better word choice to it. In some stories they could teach you knew things that they never knew before.

                  

The half fun day

Olivia, Tori and I woke up one morning and wanted to go water skiing. We ran down stairs and asked my mom she said maybe later. We ate breakfast fast so we could get dressed and ready to go skiing. We went up stairs and my dad called us. We wondered why he called us were we in trouble  did we do something wrong? What did he want us for? When  we saw him he was ready to go water  skiing. So we rushed back up stairs to put our shoes on. Then we got our bags with our note books,pencils, and snacks.

 

   When we got in the boat we had to put on our life jackets. He started the boat and we

almost fell out of the boat and then a whale. It blew air out it’s air hole and it looked like a v or an arrow. It was very weird and then the clouds started and then my friend said that the weather man said there was going to be a storm. So we paddled very fast to the shore and when we got there and it was poring down cats and dogs. So we ran back to the house and had to stay in and be bored.                 

 

Photo Courtesy of Chris

Describinghow you used technology before 5th grade

The first time I used a computer was in 1st grade. We were only there for a few minutes for a  project.I wanted to paint on there but we had to go. I came home and my mom had a computer. I was so excited about it. I wanted to get on it right away but my mom said it was not set up yet. So I got mad at her.Ihad to wait for an hour and it was no fun at all. Finally it was ready to be played on and I had a great time on it.