When I listened to my recording it will help me to understand more of my writing. Others also will think my writing is more mysterious and it will help me to be more skillful in my writing. I also want people to be more curio[u]s about my writing. It would make me happy if I wouldn't make mistakes on my paper at all. My paper would sound even better if I added more action and better word choice to it. In some stories they could teach you knew things that they never knew before.
Look at your last line :-0 and see if you can spot where you've mixed up two possible spellings of a word ....
Posted by: chris | November 29, 2006 at 05:47 AM
i really liked your writing!! keep up the good work!!
Posted by: umbrosia c. | November 30, 2006 at 01:33 PM
i think that what makes writing better is also if you put voice in it or if you record your self saying it or you make a video about it so that people get a better sence of what you were talking about.p.s can you please comment back to me so that you can see my blog it is pretty good except the only thing that we are not allowed to do is change the color from the backround and trust me im still trying to get my teacher to let us if he does say yes i will write to you and tell you so that you can look at my blog and see the color that i chose.
Posted by: Sydney | February 01, 2007 at 11:17 AM
Sydney,
I can't wait to see the color you choose. I hope it will be the color you like. If you want me to I could help you choose the color you like the best.
The Best,
Tina
Posted by: tina | February 06, 2007 at 10:08 AM
Umbrosia c.,
Thank you very much and I'll keep up my good work.
Posted by: tina | February 16, 2007 at 09:31 AM
Chris,
Thank you for showing me the missspelled words.
Posted by: tina | February 16, 2007 at 09:33 AM