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December 12, 2006

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Blythe

Eddie,

I like your story. It is very creative. I wonder why Katey was kissing every day after school. How did that help her play soccer? Also, I like that Maria threw bears at the coach. That would be something to see. I hope you keep writing stories. What other creative writing do you like to do?

Blythe

eddie

Blythe,
I like doing poems because you get to express yourself better in poems. What other creative writing do you like to do?
Eddie

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