My name is Toby and I am a(n) cat. Winter is my favorite time of the year because I love playing in the snow! To get ready for winter, I make it a point to grow an extra black and white coat of fur to keep me warm. This coat lets me play all sorts of winter games outside with my person, Cody.
I am really fat at a lot of the games people play. I like a snowball fight, except I call it Magic Snowball because I like to catch the snowball in my head and then eat it. It's cold and really heavy. Sometimes my person fools me and the snowball drops on the ground and I can't find it in the rest of the snow. Then I just eat any snow—it's just as good.
I also like to go iceskating. I follow my person on to the ice. I watch him hitting around, then I move my paws around, and soon I can lick across the ice! I wish the Olympic judges could see me, I am very graceful!
I love winter and I can't wait for the next snowstorm. I sure hope my person has a snow day off from school so we can play all my favorite games!
that is a funny story!!! this blog is good. you should add on to it. i have a suggestion though. do not overuse the word then. otherwise it is good and creative. i like it. it got me into blogging. so thank you jhonny. thank you a lot. write back to me i am your biggest fan. i am in sixth grade and i am 12 years old. you are now my friend. so ya. your my friend. thank you friend. i thank you a lot. so write back because this is probaly the longest comment you have. i am your biggest fan. so write back. ok. all write. thank you again. wait i forgot why i thank you... o yes you inspired me to start a blog. so ya again thank you. you are funny and creative. wait have i already said creative? o sorry. bye
Thank you for the nice comment it has made me bump up my super word bank.
Yes we do write about monkeys it helps inspire us. Thanks Cynthia
Johnny,
I am wondering why you and your friends have been so imspired to write about monkeys. This is a creative story. I wonder if you want to make it a little longer so that your readers learn more about what makes the weird island so weird. By the way, there are lots of "weird" islands in literature--maybe you can do some research on that, or ask your teacher about it.
Cynthia
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Michael
Johnny,
Wow! Your story is so creative and you have such a vivid imagination--I am inpressed by your creativity. You should continue your weird city story and add some more details or maybe make your story into a picture book where you illustrate your story. I think that it would turn into a wonderful story that would be fun to create and read
Can the shrooms (mushrooms) explode into 100000000 pieces and will the city change? and did the monkeys turn to roaches?
Michalle you have really inspired me
thank you Mrs.Megrew
Your story is so creative! I agree with Michelle that it would be fabulous if you made your story into a picture book. I would love to see what the monkeys, mushrooms, and the island all look like. Your great descriptions help me to imagine these things. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Johnny,
Your story is so creative! I agree with Michelle that it would be fabulous if you made your story into a picture book. I would love to see what the monkeys, mushrooms, and the island all look like. Your great descriptions help me to imagine these things. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Mushrooms and monkeys - what can I say? I agree with your other fans - go on with this strange tale!