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October 24, 2006

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chris

Hi! as you were kind enough to invite comment, I'd like to say that this is not at all boring but is a very clear exposition of what are the different categories of resources. Something that makes our writing clear is our use of punctuation. Can you see places in this post where you have run sentences together? Look at your very first sentence and see if you can spot where there should be a full stop. Then you can check the rest of the post.
I'm very, very fussy about punctuation because I like clarity in writing!

Mrs. A

I think that natural resources are very important. In fact there are many things that we all can do to protect them. Like, using less energy (like turning off lights when we are not using them). What other things do you think we can do?

Victoria

Mrs. A.
You flatter me with your comments.
To conserve our natural resource we could use them only when we really need them. We aslo could use very little of them when we use them. I hope that answers your question. Now I have some questions for you. What is your favorite resource? How often do you use it?
I'll be back and chat with you later,
Victoria

Victoria

Chris,
Thank you for telling me that I need to work on my puncuation skills. Since you told me that, I can tell you are a person who is helpfull. And a person who tells the truth. What do you do for a living?
I'll be back soon,
Victoria

Chadell

Hi im Chadell. My teacher is trying to make us a blog and suggested that we look at some web sites so I looked at yours. I thought it was marvelous.

Chadell

Hi im Chadell. My teacher is trying to make us a blog and suggested that we look at some web sites so I looked at yours. I thought it was marvelous.

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