What I learned

I learned that you have to becar ful when you write because somtimes you run sentences together sometimes.  When I start to write at the end of a sentence I sometimes put periods at the end of the question. I use to put questions at the end of sentences.  When you write a story you always need a title that goes with the story.

Comments

[chris]

Your first comment is so important! Try reading your sentences for yourself after you write them - we usually speak in sentences without running them together ('cos we'd run out of breath!)

[lindsey]

T.K.,
I think what you are trying to say is that everybody makes mistakes. That is okay if you make mistakes. Nobody is PERFECT! There is some people out in the world and think that they are PERFECT but thet are not, and we all no that. The reason I said that is because people think that they are perfect that are in our school.