I thank Jim,  Chris,  Mrs.Best,  Lindsy,  Mrs.A,  j.Esteban,  Cynthia,  Mr. j, Ms. l,  Mrs. c,  Chloe Ryder,  Kelly.

Thank you Jim for telling me my story is good, and thank you for reminding me that

a picture is a setting.     Thank you Chris for asking me questions because I feel good about my self , thank you.

Thank you Mrs. Best for telling me to add more details . I have a problem with not adding enough details. Thank you  Mrs.Best.

Thank you Lindsey for commenting to me about ,if I like swimming I do like swimming alot because the water feel good.

Thank you for commenting to me Mrs.A  I still do

                                           to be continued