The picture called enjoying the snow is very beautiful . The snow on top of the house looks like a big white cake . The ground looks like a big pool of white icing. The white yard just makes me want to go to your state.
I think you did shovel the drive way because the drive way looks like a pool.
It looks like a Beaver Dam with snow covered all over it.
The picture looks like a fluffy pillow.
Photo Courtesy of Lani
I think that you did a good job on this because it really is interesting that it snowed where you live
Posted by: Alyssa | February 01, 2007 at 11:16 AM
Hi T.K.
I am so impressed with your descriptions of the snow!! I really like the ground looks like a pool of white icing and the fluffy white pillow. I had not thought of that before. Actually it felt like that when I fell in the snow the other day.
Have you ever had a chance to play in the snow?
Best,
Lani
Posted by: Lani | February 04, 2007 at 07:17 PM
Hello there, T.K. You are certainly a writer that knows how to share detail! I love to write and also read beautiful descriptions written by other people. If I had not been able to see the photo, your words would have helped my mind "see" what you were describing. I just came back from Austria (in-between Germany and Italy). As I haven't seen snow in quite some time, the beauty of the snow took my breath away. Snow changes everything it touches into something beautiful. That is why I love snow. Have you ever noticed the silence that hangs in the air during a snowfall? The hush of snowflakes as they fall is musical in its own strange way. If you're not already, I think you should really concentrate on using that descriptive power of yours whenever you write, no matter what it is. Every writer becomes better when they practice painting a picture with words just like you did.
Posted by: Cordelia | February 07, 2007 at 11:24 AM
Hi. This is Derek from Canada. I agree with you that the snow on top of the house looks like a big fluffy cake. I don't understand why your post is called "The White Snow Story". Other than that, you did an awesome job!
Posted by: Derek | February 07, 2007 at 02:58 PM
Yes Lani I have seen snow before . It snowed over in south Georgia were I live
It snowed 2 inches. When I found out it snowed I got write it up out of my bed it was 5:00 in the
Morning. I went out side and made a snow man and had a snowball fight.
Then I went back in side because I was getting cold. When I got inside and I got by the fire.
tk
Posted by: T.K. | February 13, 2007 at 08:31 PM
Dear Cordilia , no i never noticed that silence is in the air when it snows . I can tell that you have a good imgination . I want to ask you a question how many years has it been in since you,ve seen snow?
Posted by: T.K | February 16, 2007 at 11:19 AM