T.K.'s Blogging Ring

Colts and Bears

The begining of the game was awsem because the bears ran the hole feild  right when the game started, from a kick off! I liked your blogg because i love football.  I looked at  all of the bloggs and i thought yours was the best.  When I wached the game I had a party wijth my freinds.It was a very good game.

                                              I want to ask you who  were going for?

On February 21, New Zaeland fishermen landed a colossal squid the length of a school bus.  Scientists estimate that the animal weighs obout a half ton.  Scientists call it a Mesonychoteuthis Hamilton.  First  indentified in 1995 after two tentacals were found in a sperm whales stomach,the colossal squid has long been  a mystury .  They recently discoverd collossal squid has been frozen to perserve it for scientific study.            

                                  What kind of ocean did they catch it in?

Blogging by T. K.

The exciting super bowl

The white snow story.

The picture called enjoying the snow is very beautiful . The snow on top of the house looks like a big white cake .  The ground looks like a big  pool of white icing.  The white yard just makes me want to go to your state.

I think you did shovel the drive way because the drive way looks like a pool.

  It looks like a Beaver Dam with snow covered all over it.

The picture looks like   a fluffy pillow.

Photo Courtesy of Lani

Writing Idioms

I’m hungry for more blogging.

Meaning:

I have to get to the nitty gritty in blogging.

Blogging is so cool I could pull it by the horn.

Blogging helps you with your writing so much its like a second brain.

Blogging will take your brain away.

social studies learning

What I learnd In social studies is about the civil war .  The civil war is a battle between the north and the south.  The thing I didint  understand is how Lincon stoped slavery.  He is onley one person does he just tell the u.s Army to go fight and they do?  It is impotent to learn about the civil war because you can make better decisions when you grow up.  You can teach other people to.  The civil war helped end slavery .  Lincon hated slavery  he wanted to end slavery so bad.   The civil war is to help end slavery.

                                       

Posting with my brain

This is T.k, the story I just read was called The Nata Village .  The story was about  three poor kids that lived in The Nata Village. At first I thaught the the three kids weren't poor. But they are poor because they dont have aircondisining or enough food.  The part I  didint  was when there dad hung himself  and there mom got chopped by an ax.

I thank Jim,  Chris,  Mrs.Best,  Lindsy,  Mrs.A,  j.Esteban,  Cynthia,  Mr. j, Ms. l,  Mrs. c,  Chloe Ryder,  Kelly.

Thank you Jim for telling me my story is good, and thank you for reminding me that

a picture is a setting.     Thank you Chris for asking me questions because I feel good about my self , thank you.

Thank you Mrs. Best for telling me to add more details . I have a problem with not adding enough details. Thank you  Mrs.Best.

Thank you Lindsey for commenting to me about ,if I like swimming I do like swimming alot because the water feel good.

Thank you for commenting to me Mrs.A  I still do

                                           to be continued

Macking a good post.

Before you post your story proof read your story .  Add alot of details and good words to  make your story  make sense.  I proof read my story and every time when I stop in the middle of a sentence that tells me where to put a period.

One day my family and I were going to the beach over spring brake. We were about to past the beach.  When we were going to past the beach we went over a bridge to see the ocean. We were about to turn in to our hotel. Our hotel was called Holiday Inn .  Holiday Inn had a playground with a pool. The pool had a water fountain to. Then when the day was over and we had all of that fun. We were very tired so we went to bed very quick.  It was 9.00 in the morning and it was Saturday and that was the day to leave. I was mad then my mom and dad and sister woke up  then we went to the beach for about 30 min. We went swimming and made sand castles .We had a lot of fun.  Then it was time to go home so we went home and tolled our hole family about it.  We had a lot of fun.