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October 10, 2006


Mrs. C

Your creativity shines through! You also have some worthy goals. What would you like to accomplish first if you become the first woman president? I enjoyed reading your poem!

Ms. Best

Mary this poem is great! You seem to right in a very mature and sophisticated way. Wow! You know you should find some more literature on Pegasus and Greek mythology if you are interested. Also, you use great description in lines like, "I feel a ghost's pain". I could really feel the emotion in this poem. Good job, keep up the good work.


"I feel a ghost's pain" - wow! You made me feel it too. Make every line count as this one does and you'll be a knockout.

Kara Hill

You are off to a great start! I would like to see you as the first woman president as you mentioned in your poem! I look forward to reading more from you. :)


Thank you for commenting Ms. Best. I am very interested in Greek mythology. Are you interested in Greek mythology? I'm glad you liked the details I used in my "I am" Poem.


Kara Hill I'm past happy you have questions about my poem. What kind of things are you looking forward to in my blog? Thanks for commenting.


Hi Chris. Thanks for commenting. Why did "I feel a ghosts pain" speak to you?I like that you think that I'd be a knock out if every thing would be as descrptive as that was.


Thanks for commenting Mrs.C. I would try to make sure everybody has a place to live in the country.

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