Mary's Magic of Fame

My Mirror like Reflective Comment

     What  I learned from my pod cast is that even super writers make silly mistakes. Chris said "I feel as if this story isn't finished yet." I felt a little discouraged, but I see what you meant Chris.  The story is not done. I will take your advice and stop using so many exclamation marks. J. Estaben did you see anything that needed  improvements?  Ms. Scarbary and J. Estaben I feel that you two didn't see any mistakes in mine. One last thing, It is not a bad thing to use a lot of  exclamation marks.

The Disapointment Turned Great!

     “A peaceful place during the sunset or sunrise that would be terrific. Look around. Going to a beach during the sunset would be very peaceful only a few people then. Going to a surprisingly empty place on the beach that would be tranquility.” Sarah told her friend Cassie. “Wow! I never thought about that.” Cassie said impressed. Cassie’s mom told her to come home, but she wouldn’t listen she was being disrespectful. “What else can you tell me about it?” Cassie continuingly said.

 

Sarah’s mom told her it’s time to go. “Can Cassie come to please?” Sarah yelled beggingly.

 

“No! Now get pack “Too bad she’s coming mom, and you can’t stop her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Sarah said interrupting her. She was acting very naïve.

“What did you say missy!” Her mother yelled while moving towards her.

 

She went to the beach without Cassie. “I’m so bored!” Sarah screamed from inside the van they were driving. By the time they got there Sarah was asleep. Her mom gently woke her up. When they were aloud to play on the beach it was at sunset. “I’m still super angry at you!” Sarah screamed at her mom still acting naïve. Cassie’s mom took her to the beach to surprise Sarah’s mom.

 

Cassie surprised Sarah! Sarah was feeling doubtful about lots of things. Cassie felt ignored until… “Surprise!!!”   Sarah screamed happily. Making Cassie jump really high. “Yeah you’re here! I’m so happy.”

 

Photo Courtesy of Chris

 

 

Technology Before 5th Grade

Before 5th grade I used a computer in various ways.  One way I use computers is as a 1st resource for research mainly on wikipedia on Google.com. The first time I used a computer  in kindergardnen for " First Thousand Words". I am usualy on the computer for ten through forty-five minutes daily.

  I use the computer for games to.  Some games I play are Quandry's Secret Island, O' Dell Under, and Kid's College. Another way I use computers is  work. I used to just finger peck, but now I use the homerow. The homerow is ASDF and JKL;.

Now I use them for blogging reports, and other things. I am doing so much better now thanks to blogging. I Was so eager to  work on the computer. Thanks for reading! "wink"