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November 14, 2006



You wrote a lovely story, is it true? This sounds like a very interesting and eventful vacation to Oregon. I can't imagine being in the car with my family for three days! I bet they were really ready to get out of the car and go to the beach. I wonder what happened during the picnic--was there any drama or did everyone have a good time? I would love to go to Oregon one day. I am sure that it is very beautiful with lots of stuff to do like you mentioned. You should finish your story and write about the rest of the vacation.


Please finish this story! Often my students would spend so long writing about how they prepared to go somewhere that they never arrived at the really interesting bit. There is a whale in this photo - is it coming into the story?


Dear Chris,
You sound like a teacher. Are you a teacher?You asked about the whale. Yes,a whale will come later in the story.



Also I talked to Ms.C about what you meant about your students not arrivind at the real interesting place. Know I understand.


Dear Michelle,
The story is not true. I made it up.I needed help on some things so I asked some of my friend.I didn't have time to finish my story,but the family had a great time.Do you want me to tell you what happened?



I think that your story is great! I love the creative title.

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