It was a very hot day in summer and the fisher's family was talking about a vacation. They were going to take. They were discussing about what place they were going to go and how long they were go to stay. They were going to go to the coast of Oregon. Where it was much more cooler. They were going to leave on a Friday morning.
When that day came it was very busy. There were suitcases everywhere. The house was a mess. Rooms were becoming vacant. The car was over loaded with all the suitcases. Once they were ready they head off to the road. It took three days to get there. When they got to Oregon the Fisher family was excited and happy to get out of the car. They didn't want to get in the car no more. The fishers rented a house close to the ocean. So when one of the family members get bored they can go outside to look at the view, or so that they can swim. For the rest of the day the Fisher family spend the whole time organizing and putting every thing they brought in it place.
The next day the fishers' family was gathering food for a picnic. They were going to have their picnic by the ocean.
Photo Courtesy of Chris
Mia,
You wrote a lovely story, is it true? This sounds like a very interesting and eventful vacation to Oregon. I can't imagine being in the car with my family for three days! I bet they were really ready to get out of the car and go to the beach. I wonder what happened during the picnic--was there any drama or did everyone have a good time? I would love to go to Oregon one day. I am sure that it is very beautiful with lots of stuff to do like you mentioned. You should finish your story and write about the rest of the vacation.
Posted by: Michelle | November 15, 2006 at 03:18 PM
Please finish this story! Often my students would spend so long writing about how they prepared to go somewhere that they never arrived at the really interesting bit. There is a whale in this photo - is it coming into the story?
Posted by: chris | November 19, 2006 at 07:14 PM
Dear Chris,
You sound like a teacher. Are you a teacher?You asked about the whale. Yes,a whale will come later in the story.
Mia
Posted by: mia | November 28, 2006 at 09:57 AM
Chris,
Also I talked to Ms.C about what you meant about your students not arrivind at the real interesting place. Know I understand.
Mia
Posted by: mia | November 28, 2006 at 10:14 AM
Dear Michelle,
The story is not true. I made it up.I needed help on some things so I asked some of my friend.I didn't have time to finish my story,but the family had a great time.Do you want me to tell you what happened?
Mia
Posted by: mia | November 28, 2006 at 10:21 AM
I think that your story is great! I love the creative title.
Posted by: Catherine | November 30, 2006 at 01:22 PM