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listening to my podcast

Ms.C made a podcast for my class. So that she can help us in our proofreading. It helped me a lot. I found a couple of mistakes.I got to listen to Ms.C read my story in a recorder. I think that Ms . C should keep on doing that. The podcast really helps me on finding my mistakes,make sure that the sentence makes since, and if the story is interesting to the reader or is it boring and it won't catch the readers attention.

A whale of vacation

It was a very hot day in summer and the fisher's family was talking about a vacation.  They were going to take.  They were discussing about what place they were going to go and how long they were go to stay.  They were going to go to the coast of Oregon.  Where it was much more cooler.  They were going to leave on a Friday morning.

When that day came it was very busy.  There were suitcases everywhere.  The house was a mess.  Rooms were becoming vacant.  The car was over loaded with all the suitcases. Once they were ready they head off to the road.  It took three days to get there.  When they got to Oregon the Fisher family was excited and happy to get out of the car.  They didn't want to get in the car no more.  The fishers rented a house close to the ocean.  So when one of the family members get bored they can go outside to look at the view, or so that they can swim.  For the rest of the day the Fisher family spend the whole time organizing and putting every thing they brought in it place.

The next day the fishers' family was gathering food for a picnic.  They were going to have their picnic by the ocean.

Photo Courtesy of Chris

technology everywhere

My first time using technology was when I was 6years old in school. I felt like if I was going to pass this class or was I going to need alot of help. I don't remember my first activity. As the years flew by I started to get better at finding documents I started. We have 2 computers, but they don't  have internet. So the only thing we do have are games like cards games. pinball, hearts, and painting. I mostly go to painting because I can do a drawing and then put it as the computer's screen. What I like about technology is that It can keep you entertandedfor a few hours.WhatI dislike is when it does all these negative errors. I somtimes get fustrated when that happens.Now that I'm in blogging I bet more exited because I love reading the commets that people give me. To be continue..............