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December 05, 2006



Hi Mia,

You've done a nice job of tying your title, your picture and your story ending together with your revisions. I do like it!

Can you help me? I have two questions:
1. Can you describe how the whale looked when it jumped so I can make a picture in my mind?

2. If the Fisher family put only one picture in their album of the whale, which one was it and why did they pick that one?

Do you think those additions would make one "whale" of a story!???


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