double annoying

Don't you like this poem:

She is so annoying
She thinks she’s all that
“No wait stop that”
She hits me a lot
I hit her back
But she doesn’t get grounded
I do
I hate her attitude
Do you want to know her name?
DRUMROLE PLEASE. . . .

I like it because that is how you discribe my sister. She is excatly what the poem said except the part that she doesn't get grounded because it usualy her that gets grounded.

This poem is by Sydney .Does the poem makes you think  on the last line. I think it is her sister. if you want to hear more about Sydney go to Mr.Brune's class to this link.

Comments

[Rebecca]

Hi Mia,

Boy do I know what you mean about sisters. I have four! My baby sister is the most annoying of all because she is very spoiled. What a good idea Sydney had to write a poem about the double annoying person. I think you are right that it is her sister. Do you write poetry? I would like to read a poem by you. Maybe you could write a poem about Eli?

Rebecca