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December 05, 2006



Hi Emmy,

It's good to see your revisions! Using their/there correctly is important isn't it!

This is quite a story. Can you share with me what it was that Jr. learned from the game or what the game was like? I think that will help me understand why Jr liked it so much.



Lani I really didn't think what the game was about you know how kids easily get hooked on a game.

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