Leslie's Center

How I know

     I think by listening to the recording it will help me because next time I write a post I know to reread my post aloud.When I started writing the story  I was  careless. But when I read it over I saw the mistakes and it made me realize that I really was being careless. I know that next time I will try to improve on my grammar.When the other person reads your work they will not understand what you are trying to say and that would not be good because what if it is something really really good and they don't understand it. It would make you feel good if they understood what you were trying to say. So read over your work and you might get the best comment ever. I know you would not want a 7th grader read your work and say "boy this person may need some help in writing".So I say the less mistakes the closer you are to getting your 100 in writing.

The Secret Hallway

        Grace , Chelsea,  and  Carmine  are  going  to  a  feast  at  the  their  aunts    house. When they arrived their aunt gave them a dress to go put them on. They went upstairs to put them on when they found something so unusual that it is impossible to describe. There were not sure if they should go ask their aunt what it was or see for there self

          They decided to go see for them self. While they were walking down the hallway they saw a door. When they went in the door they saw a whole different world. When they realized that they were grownups in that world. They wanted to go home but when they looked back at the door there was somebody blocking it. They said we have a party to go to we need to go home. The boy said when you are in this world time does not pass by. Then Grace said “how come is this like a magic world”. Yes these are all witches and warlocks if the master sees you he will kill you. They said then let us go out of this world

          Then the boy let them go out of the magic world he gave them each a necklace that would help them remember this world. When they went out of the hallway they were kids and the hallway was gone. They decided to never take the necklaces off ever again. They new that the feast was beginning they went downstairs to see how it was going they said it was an  adventure upstairs. But they never told why.

 

Technology's Back

Have you ever used technology? I have but it was very confusing. I think the first time I ever used the computer was in the first grade. I was learning math facts and my teacher told me to pick me to get on and do them.I felt really exited because she did not have to pick me to do the facts but she did.I think the first time i ever E mailed someone was in the  third grade. It was boring. I had fun using technology because I felt like a big girl. I sometimes don't like technology it takes forever to download. I like technology because research does not take that long to find. I really like technology but sometimes I can get mad.