These is my corrected story.
Grace , Chelsea, and Carmine are going to a feast at their aunts house. When they arrived their aunt gave them a dress to go put on. They went upstairs to put them on. Then they found something so unusual that it is impossible to describe. There were not sure if they should go ask their aunt what it was or see for there self.
They decided to go see for them self. While they were walking down the hallway they saw a door. When they went in the door they saw a whole different world. When they realized that they were grownups in that world they were shoked. They wanted to go home but when they looked back at the door there was somebody blocking it. They said we have a party to go to we need to go home. The boy said when you are in this world time does not pass by. Then Grace said “how come is this like a magic world”. The boy replied "Yes these are all witches and warlocks if the master sees you he will kill you". They said then let us go out of this world.
Then the boy let them go out of the magic world he gave them each a necklace that would help them remember the world. When they went out of the hallway they were kids and the hallway was gone. They decided they would never take the necklaces off again.They new that the feast was beginning they went downstairs to see how it was going. They said it was an adventure upstairs. But they never told why.
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