"Help, I'm trapped in a forest full of brown tree snakes!" Last week I flew with my tourist group, but got on the wrong plane. Instead I went to the country Guam. There I took a trail of my own into a forest. In the forest I found brown tree snakes that were invading different creatures. Suddenly some brown tree snakes corralled around my ankles. I yelled "Help! Somebody help me!!" No one came. I knew I was going to be quite scared in the forst is no one came. What would you do if you were in the same situation as this character?
Jennifer: Your story was great! I loved the headline. I would have been scared too. I'm not sure what I would have done if I were in the same situation. Perhaps call out for "animal control"?. Keep up the good work.
Denise Smith
P.S.: The picture was wonderful. It went along perfectly withyour story.
Posted by: Denise M. Smith | September 27, 2002 at 09:37 AM
Jennifer's Story certainly gets my attention. This paragraph is full of action! Excellent work.
Posted by: Esta | September 29, 2002 at 04:01 PM
Jennifer,
I loved your story! The art work is great. You make both a good author and illustrator! I look forward to future stories.
Mrs. Gibson
Posted by: Debi Gibson | October 03, 2002 at 10:32 AM