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Emily

This is Emily,and I'm going to post my new leads.

What's brown, made 10 types of birds leave, and is invading Guam?
Brown tree snakes.

Alert! Alert! A highly dangerous nan is heading towards Atlanta!

Who could have done this? cried the young man.

Lucy U.

Hi, this is Lucy! Here are some of my new introductions:
This is a new question: What would you do if you were the only person on earth?
This is my riddle that you can grapple with:What is a mystery and has pages?
a mystery story
Open with how you felt:About September 11th- My stomach hurt, my spine had chilles, my body trembling with fear and a question- Why would someone so crule hurt such inasent people?

Emily

This is Emily,and I'm going to post my new leads.

What's brown, made 10 types of birds leave, and is invading Guam?
Brown tree snakes.

Alert! Alert! A highly dangerous nan is heading towards Atlanta!

Who could have done this? cried the young man.

Derrick

NewsIntroductions Derrick

What is in the air and it does damage? What would you do if you were climbing and you fell and broke your neck? Attention news bulleton three highjackers stole the famous picture of Mona Lisa! Alert! Alert! a deadly man with explosives in Georgia!

Jennifer

This is Jennifer,and I'm going to post my new interduction.

Help I'm trapped in a forest full of brown tree snakes!

Last week,I flew with tourist group, but got on the
wroung plane.Instead I went to the coutry Guam.
There I took a trail of my own into a dark gloomy forest.

Perla

This is Perla and this are my new introductions.
Do you know where Arafats compound is .It is Rumalah
What is strong,dangerous.and big.It is a storm

Dane

News Introductions By:Dane Robinson

1.What will bush do about Cuba's nuclear weapons?

2."Keep on the lookout for two suspected terrorists!"

3.How would you like to learn more about current events?

4.Please stay in line and do not run on a firedrill.

5I was stuck in a tree once, I was so scared.

Emily

This is Emily,and I'm going to post my new leads.

What's brown, made 10 types of birds leave, and is invading Guam?
Brown tree snakes.

Alert! Alert! A highly dangerous nan is heading towards Atlanta!

Who could have done this? cried the young man.

Jacqueline

Hi, it's Jacqueline
Here are some of my introductions:


* How could you win $1,000?!

*A hurricane's eye is quite come.

*I'm traped , cried the boy, but I couldn't answer him.

Well that's all. Cou!!!!!

-Jacqueline

Emily

This is Emily,and I'm going to post my new leads.

What's brown, made 10 types of birds leave, and is invading Guam?
Brown tree snakes.

Alert! Alert! A highly dangerous nan is heading towards Atlanta!

Who could have done this? cried the young man.

Emily

This is Emily,and I'm going to post my new leads.

What's brown, made 10 types of birds leave, and is invading Guam?
Brown tree snakes.

Alert! Alert! A highly dangerous nan is heading towards Atlanta!

Who could have done this? cried the young man.

Lynne Jordan

Hello, Lucy! Today during a meeting with Ms. Davis I asked her to show me samples of what students could do with technology. She showed me NewsQuest from J.H.House Elementary. This is exciting work that you and your schoolmates are doing. I am a teacher at Georgia State University in Atlanta. But, enough about me...
Your new introductions are very interesting to me. I like the way you used questions to "hook" the reader. The questions made me want to know more. The descriptions of your feelings about September 11 were familiar to me because I felt just the same. A riddle for you to grapple with...How do you begin a story about a lake? "Once a pond a time"
Keep up the good work!
Ms. Jordan

Candy

I would love to win a $1000!

Candy

Ann

Emily:
What's a nan. I'm really worried. I like that one the best.
Ann

Molly Hammons

Perla,
This is a terrific start! I like the starter sentence that asks a question. Try to remember to add punctuation like question marks and be sure to read over your work before you submit. I can't wait to see the next post!

Debi Gibson

Dane,
I love your ideas for story starters. Where did you come up your ideas? Remember to capitalize the first letter in a last name (Bush). Can't wait to find out what how you got stuck in that tree!
Mrs. Gibson

Mrs. Crowder

I would like to hear more about the three highjackers.

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