Patrick's Update

My Final Post

This has been the greatest year I have ever had. I never learned so much and made so many friends and it's been so great. I will miss all of my friends going to C.M.S because I may never see them again. I will mainly miss Mrs.Davis because thanks to her I learned how write better sentences. Also I know can fix all my errors. I've been able to get good grades on my test and the person to thank for that is Mrs. Davis.So I'd like to thank you.

My Year in Weblogging

What a great year! I've had a great year in weblogging I've learned so much here  and made so many different friends here in weblogging. They've been so good to me and I having so much fun here writing stories and making tips for other people to use in their writing. Also I like to tell people about my pass and making action stories for people to enjoy and pass on to other people. I've been talking to people all over the United States and people in Canada I've talked to college professors and book writers and so on. I hope I get to continue doing this one day.

A Snowy Day

A long time ago me and my brother almost died and this is the story. One day our family took a vacation to the snowy mountains. We were getting our cabin at the bottom of the hill  from the owner. The owner tolled us to be careful because weired things been happening around mountain. So my mom, dad, and my oldest brother stayed at the cabin while Deon and I went snow boarding down the mountain.We took the sky lift to the top of the mountain. We were halfway up the hill when I looked down and it looked like my eyes w

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Three Good Tips

I made these three good tips for all people to use so make sure you use them they might just help you improve your writing skills .

1.When you write you  must write with understandable words. You must use words that you and the reader can understand. So don't just use words that sound good and you don't know what they mean use words that you know.

2.You must use words that makes it seem like your talking to the reader. When you talk just talk like you normaly talk. Don't talk like the reader wants you to talk just talk with feeling give them the way you talk.Let them feel like you're right beside the person.

3.You must use all writing skills you know so the writing comes out perfect when it's done. You also must use your writing skills correctly. Because if you don't the reader will not understand what you are talking about. Make it seem like you know what you are talking about.

A Speacial News Report

1.Around the world in three days

A. Pilot Steve Fossett sets a record of travalling around the world in three days all by himself. With the only thing to eat and drink are milkshakes! Amazing, but this is even more he didn't even sleep. Not even once he struggled to keep himself awake.

B.He did all that just so he could beat his record he seat 2004 wich he made around the world in 58 days. This time he barly made it because all the fuel the plane. So thats it so go lift off on your own adventures because thats all for now.

My Tip

Don’t let friends or family critique your work. I learned the hard way, either you’ll take their criticism and tell them to shove it up their nostrils, or they’ll be so honey-coated-sweet you won’t actually get a critique. That is a very good tip because I've had friends and family make fun of my work like not long ago I made a post about how my brother made fun of me. I also have good tip my tip is that when you"re writing you can't just write what your teacher would like. Instead put yourself into the story you must be the words. You must understand the story. That's my tip and it's one of my favorites.

Don't Ride A Small Speed Boat

This mornig we went to the Wacky Web Tales site and made a story and were is the story I made.

The speed boat Lucky Lulu was sinking quickly. "Abandon ship! Everyone into the wolves!" hollered Captain Harris. But the crew and passengers knew there were not enough wolves, so they threw tigers, lions, and even one giant monkey overboard. Then everyone ate into the small water and grabbed onto whatever they could.

Captain Harris ordered everyone to form a line, tie their crafts together, and sing "Welcome To The Jungle". First in line were Jetta and Jean, bobbing in their Large Eagle. Next, came Little Jhon hanging on for dear life to a slimy dog. They were followed by 100,999,999,999,999,999,999,999 others.

After 150 days, they were rescued by a strange hawk. Not one passenger from the Lucky Lulu has taken a boat ride again.

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Why Weblogging Should Stay

I think weblogging classes should stay because it helps people get more friends and communicate more. It also improves your talking and writing skills. Kids learn how to talk with other people and maybe learn more.

I've learned a lot of computer skills and made friends with famous people like Pat Street. Even people from different states and continents like Canada, and Chicago have posted to me and maybe other people to. That’s why I like weblogging and many other kids do too.