Patrick's Update

The Incredibles

A superhero who goes by the name Mr. Incredible but he was saved by a person who was trying to kill himself. He and other superheroes were forced to quit being a hero.

So him and his family had to act like a real family. Later Mr. Incredible was given an offer to be a superhero again to save the World. He goes but he figurews it's a trap but it's too late. So now Helen, Violet, and Dash have to save him. Also, Jack Jack, the baby of the family, will help.

Writing on weblogs

I've been in the weblog group for  some time and I like it a lot. My teacher in this group is Ms. Davis. She is nice and I work in this class with other fifth graders. The main thing we do in the class is work on the computer and on our weblog. First thing we do is write down a topic in our own words. Next we check it  all over and if we mess up we rewrite it and finaly post it in our weblog system. As soon as that is over  and it is posted people wrote comments to me about my story.  As soon as that's done, I get to answer their comments  and they get to talk back to my answers to their comments. So, it's like having a conversation on the computer! Cool, isn't it? Maybe who ever is reading this should also join the webloggers too. I hope you do.

If you were in the weblogger group what would your first post be about?

Red Star

The red star Is 33 light years away from earth.Just close enough for the Hubble Telescope or ground telescopes to see it. Scientist are able to see dust disk with clumps of matter that might form planets. The Circumstellar disks are signposts for planet formation and is the youngest star where we directly observe light reflected from the dust producted  byextrasolar comets.