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Da Hyun

Hi Patrick!
I am in grade five and I sort of do need somehelp in writinga dn understanding what I wrote. I got a great tip from you
Thank you!


Dear, Patrick
I liked your report on the pilot. It was interesting and I think you have good taste. the interesting things is that he never slept and only had milkshakes. Keep up the writing!


I wish you had a great time reading this tips and I hope you use them to get even better at writing.


I wonder if he just wanted to make a new world record or did he do it do it to prove that some one that he could?Do you know?

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