Patrick's Update

The Tsunami

An article that I just read was about the horrible tsunami that hit southeast Asia.I got this statement from the Global Gang:

The tsunami destroyed everything in its path in the town of Moratuwa.

Many people lost their home, family, friends, and belongings. Many people were badly hurt by this wave of death.

This makes me feel bad about the people who lost their family in this horrible accident I always think to myself.  What if it was me?  What if I lost my family in the accident? That's why I feel bad for these people and I hope they get better.

 

Hurricane Charley

Hurricane Charley rampages through a small town that depends on ice, and freezers, because of the burning hot tempertures there. Families lost their homes, their things, and most of their clothing. Churches are destroyed and schools are also gone. Only a little bit still stands after the disaster. The families try hard to fix it and to find ice to survive.

I wunder how many hurricanes have occured in the last two years. Do you know how many hurricanes have occured?

Hurricane Ivan

Ivan finally hit Jamaica and measured at 55 feet of waves and a speed about 30 miles per hour. At that speed it destroyed the town and caused major flooding in the small village and other counties suffered flood. Ivan hit up to 130 miles per hour winds. Jamaica was one of the first to feel Ivan’s power.
More was just ahead. Do you know anything about Hurricane Ivan?

My Revised Version

After Ivan

Ivan had came out of nowhere and nailed into Jamaica with a huge strike of terror. The people suffered 55 feet of waves and 30 miles per hour speed. Also up to 130 miles per hour winds! A small village was hit also. Ivan left major flooding to counties and Jamaica was only the first to feel Ivan’s horrible power. What will you do if a stage 5 hurricane was coming to your town please tell?