Patrick's Update

My Final Post

This has been the greatest year I have ever had. I never learned so much and made so many friends and it's been so great. I will miss all of my friends going to C.M.S because I may never see them again. I will mainly miss Mrs.Davis because thanks to her I learned how write better sentences. Also I know can fix all my errors. I've been able to get good grades on my test and the person to thank for that is Mrs. Davis.So I'd like to thank you.

My Year in Weblogging

What a great year! I've had a great year in weblogging I've learned so much here  and made so many different friends here in weblogging. They've been so good to me and I having so much fun here writing stories and making tips for other people to use in their writing. Also I like to tell people about my pass and making action stories for people to enjoy and pass on to other people. I've been talking to people all over the United States and people in Canada I've talked to college professors and book writers and so on. I hope I get to continue doing this one day.

Weblog Report

Being in the weblog group these past few months has been a great thing. This group proves to me that there are many things I still don't know. When I first came to this group I didn't know how to do  that much. But thanks to all the friends I made they showed me how to do more. I thought I might be helpless but I got enough help. Mrs.Davis the group teacher taught us how to blogg and how to get to typepad. Typepad is were we write all the post we do at home for homework. She tells us what our work will be, but usually we write one whole page and the next time we come to the group we write our homework on our weblog. She also taught us how to hyperlink. Thats when we go to someone's weblog copy some words from there and put it in our writing and when it's posted all we have to do is press on the words we took from there and it will take you to that persons weblog. If you really liked my story don't sit down and read mine. Go join and you will see how fun this is for yourself.

Writing on weblogs

I've been in the weblog group for  some time and I like it a lot. My teacher in this group is Ms. Davis. She is nice and I work in this class with other fifth graders. The main thing we do in the class is work on the computer and on our weblog. First thing we do is write down a topic in our own words. Next we check it  all over and if we mess up we rewrite it and finaly post it in our weblog system. As soon as that is over  and it is posted people wrote comments to me about my story.  As soon as that's done, I get to answer their comments  and they get to talk back to my answers to their comments. So, it's like having a conversation on the computer! Cool, isn't it? Maybe who ever is reading this should also join the webloggers too. I hope you do.

If you were in the weblogger group what would your first post be about?