What I Have Been Taught and What I Should Be Taught in the Future

    At the beginning of the year, I thought that my teacher would never pick me to do anything special. When I heard that she chose me to be in a special writing class, I was absolutely  thrilled!!!!

     Now, I can take a regular writing class and a special writing class!!! Ms. Davis has been really nice to me and has taught me how to be a better writer.

     She has taught me and others how to take pride and responsibility in our writing. She taught the group  how to spell check, make good writing tips, and how to "bump up " our writing.

     Later on, I hope that we will be able to post about something new and adventurous. The topic that I would choose to write about would be :

       Write as if you were stranded on a island with  a group of people that all needed shelter, food, and water.

     I think that this topic would be fun to write about!!!!

Comments

[ceydy]

I think your writing was very good because that's what happend to me three years ago but litte diffrent

[Nancy McKeand]

I think that would make a wonderful story, Shelby. I hope you will write it. And I hope I get to read it on your blog!

[alexis barajas]

THIS WAS A GREAT STORY I HOPE YOU GET THIS COMMENT KEEP IN TOUCH @ [email protected]

ALWAYS ALEXIS BARAJAS

[Kimi]

Good job! Keep up with the good work...Maybe you'll be an author one day

[Ellen]

It sounds like you were able to learn a lot about writing in your class. I hope that you keep writing, even after your class has ended. Your idea to write about being stranded on an island sounds very interesting and exciting. I hope that you have the opportunity to write about this topic sometime soon.

[Michelle C]

Shelby,
Your post reminded me about a special teacher that I had in high school that inspired me to read, write, and learn. I think that it is so wonderful that your teacher, Ms. Davis, inspired you and how she made you feel special and excited about writing. Teachers like Ms. Davis are rare, but I hope to inspire and motivate my students as she has done for you.
Writing is obviously something that you are good at and feel very passionate about and I hope that you continue to write and develop your passion!

[woofa1]

Wow you must be pretty special. I think that your teacher thinks highly of you. I hope that you have a good year with your teacher. Ms. Davis is a rare kind of teacher so enjoy her while you can!

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