Yessenia's Weblog

My Farewell

Blogging

During this year of blogging I've learned a lot. One thing that I have learned about is that you should always try to make your writing interesting so that you can leave readers hanging. Another thing which is the most important is that you should always do your own work and not others this is called plagiarism. Some of the writers like to read something that is funny,sad,and informational. My tip that I always keep in mind is that you should always write about something that you are interested in. Probally during the future people would communicate with blogs.

My opinion on taking the CRCT was that it made me seem tired and bored. I was thinking that why don't they just test us on something that we've learned but at the same time make it more challenging. Teachers could also test the ones that need to get the skill then that's when they could test the whole class at one whole time. That's just what my opinion was during the CRCT.

Top Ten Tips

1. Always make sure that your spelling is correct.
2. Use words that make your writing seem as if it comes to live.
3. Always make your writing nice and neat.
4. Proofread your work so that it looks like if it is written by an adult.
5. Make sure your that you can also understand what your writing is trying to say.
6. Write about something your are interested or else it makes your writing seem boring.
7. Always do your very best work.
8. Make sure your writing is understandable.
9. Make sure also that you write as you would talk.
10. Do your work as if it was going to be shown to a special person.

A Day In Romes

When I woke up I was on a plane heading off to Rome. The plane felt as if it was swirling and twirling. It made me feel as if I was going to throw up. When I arrived in Rome I ran out the plane waited in the line of traffic until I was finally able to  leave that no good airport. I went straight to my apartment and just fell on my bed. Then I got up and looked around to see if anyone was in my room. That room made fell insecure, so when I was leaving I tried to open the door but I wasn't able to open it. I ran to the back door to see if something was going on in my front door. The police was at my front door saying that a guy was trying to get my purse to see if I had any money. I thanked the police and then went to the air port and got a ticket so that I can go back to my home.

These are some things that you should remember while writing .

1. Ideas & Contents- Make sure that your  writing seem like if it is coming out. Make sure that you have all of the details that you want.
2. Organization- Is your topic in order? Does my topic make sense?
3. Voice- Do I think and agree that my topic is understandable?
4. Word Choice- Have I used different words instead of repeating them over and over?
5. Sentence Fluency- Did I make my writing seem a lot?
6. Conventions- Does my writing flow with every part of my story, even my title?

Writing Tips

Writing tips are very important because they can help all the time. Usually every time when you read someones tips you learn something these are mine......

1. Always make sure that you use very good vocabulary so that you can get the readers attention and by using descriptive words.
2. Organize your writing so that it bumps it up and makes your writing seem nice and neat.
3. Make sure that you write about something that you really are interested and not something that seems boring to you because then it really would make your writing seem boring.

Today I went to a web site called Wacky Web Tales

http://www.eduplace.com/tales/ there I made a story. The story told you what to do, but in the fun way. After I was done with all of the words that I had written they were made into a story.

What Are Friends For?

Last night, as I sat in the Living Room eating oranges and watching Lizzie Mcguire, the telephone rang. When I picked it up, I heard a cooking sound. It was my huge friend Andrew. He told me that he couldn't solve the thirty problems that Mrs. Mateling had assigned for homework. I'm pretty bad in math, so it took me only sixty minutes to figure out the answers. "These problems are easy!" I told him. "Use your book." "It's broken!" he said. "I think my gorilla captured over it." "Then you'll just have to use your fingers!" I suggested loudly. 'Quiet'!! You're a big help! The next time I need advice, I'll call Hillary Duff," he shouted. I don't know why Andrew was so mad. Did he want me to give him the answers.

Weblogs

I think that schools should be able to use weblogs because it lets students say whats on their mind like if they want to say something but they are to shy with the other kids then little by little they might get used to talking and they might after all not be shy anymore. Students never know when they will get a comment  of a person like on another country or state. We mostly write about current event. Writing about the news is fun because we get to keep track of whats happening in the world.

Arthur Miller

Artthur Miller was a guy who died at the age of 89 because of heart failure.He was a play writer. When he would perform them  people would gather around and watch him perform while they were just passing and also they would just sit there .