Yessenia's Weblog

Sudan

     A girl's village gets burned. Her family had to live under a plastic sheet because they had no tent and barely any food to eat. Her family had to be sent away to a refugee camp where soldiers helped give them a tent and a couple of foods for them to eat.

Explain what this made you form an opinion about.

My Weblog

 

     If I could make my writing better I would use better descriptive words to get the readers attention. I think that I could also use exciting words for my beginning and last sentences.

It is also cool because you get to choose your topics. You can also express yourself and make it seem as if you have your own diary.

That is why I like to blog. Also you can make your writing seem as if you are in your writing. To me it is as if I can say whatever I want instead of keeping it to myself. For example, if you want to express yourself you don't

have to keep it to yourself because you can let other people read your thoughts.

Those are my reasons for liking to blog.

Shark Tale

A little fish named Oscar tells a lie so that he can be famous.But  Oscar's wish turns out to be trouble. Oscar  doesn't realize that he has had what he needed all along. A little fish named Angie has a secret crush on Oscar that only she knows about. Angie turns out to be having competion because when a new dragon fish hears that Oscar has become some kind of hero she realizes that she has a crush on him too. This was a short summary of what Shark Tale.