If I could make my writing better I would use better descriptive words to get the readers attention. I think that I could also use exciting words for my beginning and last sentences.
It is also cool because you get to choose your topics. You can also express yourself and make it seem as if you have your own diary.
That is why I like to blog. Also you can make your writing seem as if you are in your writing. To me it is as if I can say whatever I want instead of keeping it to myself. For example, if you want to express yourself you don't
have to keep it to yourself because you can let other people read your thoughts.
Those are my reasons for liking to blog.
You sound very excited about being able to express yourself. That is one of the areas where I think many students are not comfortable, especially in their writing. Keep up the positive attitude, and use lots of descriptive words to brighten up your writing.
Posted by: Mrs. Warren | December 10, 2004 at 09:29 AM
Yes, weblogging is cool! You are doing a great job, and I am proud of your excellent writing. Keep up the good blogging!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | January 05, 2005 at 01:46 PM
I'm now trying to take your hint.
Posted by: Yessenia | May 12, 2005 at 08:53 AM