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These are some things that you should remember while writing .

1. Ideas & Contents- Make sure that your  writing seem like if it is coming out. Make sure that you have all of the details that you want.
2. Organization- Is your topic in order? Does my topic make sense?
3. Voice- Do I think and agree that my topic is understandable?
4. Word Choice- Have I used different words instead of repeating them over and over?
5. Sentence Fluency- Did I make my writing seem a lot?
6. Conventions- Does my writing flow with every part of my story, even my title?

Writing Tips

Writing tips are very important because they can help all the time. Usually every time when you read someones tips you learn something these are mine......

1. Always make sure that you use very good vocabulary so that you can get the readers attention and by using descriptive words.
2. Organize your writing so that it bumps it up and makes your writing seem nice and neat.
3. Make sure that you write about something that you really are interested and not something that seems boring to you because then it really would make your writing seem boring.

Today I went to a web site called Wacky Web Tales

http://www.eduplace.com/tales/ there I made a story. The story told you what to do, but in the fun way. After I was done with all of the words that I had written they were made into a story.

What Are Friends For?

Last night, as I sat in the Living Room eating oranges and watching Lizzie Mcguire, the telephone rang. When I picked it up, I heard a cooking sound. It was my huge friend Andrew. He told me that he couldn't solve the thirty problems that Mrs. Mateling had assigned for homework. I'm pretty bad in math, so it took me only sixty minutes to figure out the answers. "These problems are easy!" I told him. "Use your book." "It's broken!" he said. "I think my gorilla captured over it." "Then you'll just have to use your fingers!" I suggested loudly. 'Quiet'!! You're a big help! The next time I need advice, I'll call Hillary Duff," he shouted. I don't know why Andrew was so mad. Did he want me to give him the answers.

Weblogs

I think that schools should be able to use weblogs because it lets students say whats on their mind like if they want to say something but they are to shy with the other kids then little by little they might get used to talking and they might after all not be shy anymore. Students never know when they will get a comment  of a person like on another country or state. We mostly write about current event. Writing about the news is fun because we get to keep track of whats happening in the world.

Arthur Miller

Artthur Miller was a guy who died at the age of 89 because of heart failure.He was a play writer. When he would perform them  people would gather around and watch him perform while they were just passing and also they would just sit there .