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My opinion on taking the CRCT was that it made me seem tired and bored. I was thinking that why don't they just test us on something that we've learned but at the same time make it more challenging. Teachers could also test the ones that need to get the skill then that's when they could test the whole class at one whole time. That's just what my opinion was during the CRCT.

Top Ten Tips

1. Always make sure that your spelling is correct.
2. Use words that make your writing seem as if it comes to live.
3. Always make your writing nice and neat.
4. Proofread your work so that it looks like if it is written by an adult.
5. Make sure your that you can also understand what your writing is trying to say.
6. Write about something your are interested or else it makes your writing seem boring.
7. Always do your very best work.
8. Make sure your writing is understandable.
9. Make sure also that you write as you would talk.
10. Do your work as if it was going to be shown to a special person.

A Day In Romes

When I woke up I was on a plane heading off to Rome. The plane felt as if it was swirling and twirling. It made me feel as if I was going to throw up. When I arrived in Rome I ran out the plane waited in the line of traffic until I was finally able to  leave that no good airport. I went straight to my apartment and just fell on my bed. Then I got up and looked around to see if anyone was in my room. That room made fell insecure, so when I was leaving I tried to open the door but I wasn't able to open it. I ran to the back door to see if something was going on in my front door. The police was at my front door saying that a guy was trying to get my purse to see if I had any money. I thanked the police and then went to the air port and got a ticket so that I can go back to my home.