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SuperThinker

When you're right, you're right, Emily! Weblogs are the best! Well, just imagine--if it wasn't for blogging, I would never have gotten to read your great writing and write to you! Oh yeah, I answered your question about the countries I visited. Check it out! Blog 'ya later!

Jerry

Hi Yoceline!
I love your last sentence! "Wrinkles is the best of the four corners of the Earth!" Now that makes me want to paint the town red! You have the beginnings of a very good story but you need to work on the flow if it so that it makes better sense. You have chosen such good idioms! I am proud of you.
Mrs. Davis

Derrick

Yociline, your story was great but I caught that in the first sentance, Call needs to be called because it is past tense. In the 3rd sentence I figured that you could either have a period or make she lower case, but over all it was Great.

Yoceline

Thank you Mrs.Davis for the great comment. I PROMISED that I will work in the first sentences. Thanks again!!!!!

Yoceline

Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.

Yoceline

Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.

Yoceline

I am so glad weblogs are so helpful to a SuperThinker like you notting would it be the saqme with out weblogs. YOCELINE,SEE YA'.

SuperThinker

Hello again, Yoceline! It is I, SuperThinker, your superblogging friend. Don't be down in the dumps--you're top drawer in my book! Keep on expressing yourself on the web, Yoceline. I like it! :)

Yoceline

Hello SuperThinker I am so glad that I am in the top drawer in my book. I will keep expressing myself in the web. SEE YA'!

Jerry

Hi Yoceline!! Its me Jerry. I think your idiom story is great. My favorite idiom in the story is burning the midnight oil. Keep up the good work. See Ya!!!

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