Have you ever wonder how fun is to have a weblog? Well, I do. I am in a group called the wrinkles. We have lots of fun. Our teachers are Mrs.Davis and Mrs.Smith. Every time we are going to do something Mrs. Davis says break a leg with your work. Sometimes when I forget my homework I burn the midnight oil. When Mrs.Davis asked me something in front of the group I fell butterflies in my stomach. I am champing at the bit so it gets to be 8:30 A.M. Sometimes the group, does not want to talk, we clammed up. Every time we don't talk loud Mrs.Davis says "Come again?" The homework is easy as pie.
We also got a friend her name is SuperThinker. I am down in the dumps when she does not write to me. I want every Tom, Dick, and Herry to write to us. Wrinkles is the best of the four corners of the earth.
When you're right, you're right, Emily! Weblogs are the best! Well, just imagine--if it wasn't for blogging, I would never have gotten to read your great writing and write to you! Oh yeah, I answered your question about the countries I visited. Check it out! Blog 'ya later!
Posted by: SuperThinker | February 06, 2004 at 08:53 PM
Hi Yoceline!
I love your last sentence! "Wrinkles is the best of the four corners of the Earth!" Now that makes me want to paint the town red! You have the beginnings of a very good story but you need to work on the flow if it so that it makes better sense. You have chosen such good idioms! I am proud of you.
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Jerry | February 18, 2004 at 10:31 PM
Yociline, your story was great but I caught that in the first sentance, Call needs to be called because it is past tense. In the 3rd sentence I figured that you could either have a period or make she lower case, but over all it was Great.
Posted by: Derrick | February 19, 2004 at 09:47 AM
Thank you Mrs.Davis for the great comment. I PROMISED that I will work in the first sentences. Thanks again!!!!!
Posted by: Yoceline | February 19, 2004 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.
Posted by: Yoceline | February 19, 2004 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.
Posted by: Yoceline | February 19, 2004 at 10:31 AM
I am so glad weblogs are so helpful to a SuperThinker like you notting would it be the saqme with out weblogs. YOCELINE,SEE YA'.
Posted by: Yoceline | February 19, 2004 at 10:36 AM
Hello again, Yoceline! It is I, SuperThinker, your superblogging friend. Don't be down in the dumps--you're top drawer in my book! Keep on expressing yourself on the web, Yoceline. I like it! :)
Posted by: SuperThinker | February 19, 2004 at 11:27 PM
Hello SuperThinker I am so glad that I am in the top drawer in my book. I will keep expressing myself in the web. SEE YA'!
Posted by: Yoceline | March 04, 2004 at 09:07 AM
Hi Yoceline!! Its me Jerry. I think your idiom story is great. My favorite idiom in the story is burning the midnight oil. Keep up the good work. See Ya!!!
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