Weblogs

Have you ever wonder how fun is to have a weblog? Well, I do. I am in a group called the wrinkles. We have lots of fun. Our teachers are Mrs.Davis and Mrs.Smith. Every time we are going to do something Mrs. Davis says break a leg with your work. Sometimes when I forget my homework I burn the midnight oil. When Mrs.Davis asked me something in front of the group I fell butterflies in my stomach. I am champing at the bit so it gets to be 8:30 A.M. Sometimes the group, does not want to talk, we clammed up. Every time we don't talk loud Mrs.Davis says "Come again?" The homework is easy as pie.

     We also got a friend her name is SuperThinker. I am down in the dumps when she does not write to me. I want every Tom, Dick, and Herry to write to us. Wrinkles is the best of the four corners of the earth.

  

Comments

[SuperThinker]

When you're right, you're right, Emily! Weblogs are the best! Well, just imagine--if it wasn't for blogging, I would never have gotten to read your great writing and write to you! Oh yeah, I answered your question about the countries I visited. Check it out! Blog 'ya later!

[Jerry]

Hi Yoceline!
I love your last sentence! "Wrinkles is the best of the four corners of the Earth!" Now that makes me want to paint the town red! You have the beginnings of a very good story but you need to work on the flow if it so that it makes better sense. You have chosen such good idioms! I am proud of you.
Mrs. Davis

[Derrick]

Yociline, your story was great but I caught that in the first sentance, Call needs to be called because it is past tense. In the 3rd sentence I figured that you could either have a period or make she lower case, but over all it was Great.

[Yoceline]

Thank you Mrs.Davis for the great comment. I PROMISED that I will work in the first sentences. Thanks again!!!!!

[Yoceline]

Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.

[Yoceline]

Thank you Derrick for the great command. I will try to make the sentences better!!!! Thak you.

[Yoceline]

I am so glad weblogs are so helpful to a SuperThinker like you notting would it be the saqme with out weblogs. YOCELINE,SEE YA'.

[SuperThinker]

Hello again, Yoceline! It is I, SuperThinker, your superblogging friend. Don't be down in the dumps--you're top drawer in my book! Keep on expressing yourself on the web, Yoceline. I like it! :)

[Yoceline]

Hello SuperThinker I am so glad that I am in the top drawer in my book. I will keep expressing myself in the web. SEE YA'!

[Jerry]

Hi Yoceline!! Its me Jerry. I think your idiom story is great. My favorite idiom in the story is burning the midnight oil. Keep up the good work. See Ya!!!

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